2nd pattern of my own opinions please

[invasion]

Well after doing the tutorial yesterday I thought this morning I would see if I could do a rabbit pattern of my own for a friend. I have two attachments can you guys tell if it is ok and which is the best, and any way I could improve on it ? the text is going to be changed so it has no floaters and a bit more of a tidy up all over

thanks!

[grampa]

Well done thats great, The only thing I would do is make the line thinner around the head and ears and give the front feet a bit more detail apart from that it ready to cut, great job

Don't forget to post a pic when you cut it.........Paul

[invasion]

Well done thats great, The only thing I would do is make the line thinner around the head and ears and give the front feet a bit more detail apart from that it ready to cut, great job

Don't forget to post a pic when you cut it.........Paul

 

Thanks for your input really appreciated

Do you think the first or second one is better? the second one has the ear tip more more black. I know what you mean about the front foot and the lines will get to work on that tomorrow the get cutting

[Oges]

I'd probably go for the first one. As grampa said, just thin some of the lines a bit and after a bit of a clean up you have yourself a pattern ready to cut

[Oges]

Here is a site with a lot of rabbit drawings you could adapt to a scrollable pattern

http://www.krisannecrosbypottery.com/_d ... /index.htm

[invasion]

Thats great I really appreciate you posting this.

 

Adam

[BuLLdoGG]

Yip thinner lines would be good