My second attempt at pattern making

[cdrover]

I feel I am making progress with the pattern making but still need some help to get it right before I show it to "The "SAW". Any and all comments and advice would be welcome. Thanks

[Dan]

Great start. I would add more detail to the eyes and glasses. And maybe a little more detail to the face.

 

Dan

[grampa]

Hi Clyde, I would agree with Dan, Hope you don't mind but I Altered a copy to show you plus I would make the bridge in the pupils go to the left rather than straight up apart from that GREAT JOB......Paul PS it would still look good cut if you just made the lines around the nose and mouth a bit wider

[cdrover]

Dan and Paul, thanks for your comments. Your suggestions have added a lot to the pattern. Thanks again.

Clyde