Roly, everyone knows that as a skydiver you wait till you are 10 feet off the ground before pulling the ripcord - that way if the chute don't open you can jump the last 10 feet!!!!
Heppnerguy, that looks like a great pattern to me, there were only a couple of minor problems with it which Don has kindly fixed for you. Keep practicing and you will get to be one of the great pattern makers here, you are doing pretty well now.
Keefie